Thursday, 16 May 2019

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Annyeonghaseyo, My name is Annabelle and I’m a year six at Waitohu School, my teacher is Mr Ward. My Favourite subject is art, the sports that I am doing are swimming & netball. My hobbies are art, netball, swimming and edits (online). My favourite song is Mikrokosmos by BTS and my favourite album are Love Yourself:Tear, Her and Answer, WINGS and Map Of The Soul Persona by BTS.The Language I only speak is English but I am starting to learn Korean.The people that I get inspired are BTS/ Bangtan Sonyeondan and BLACKPINK. They have helped me through tough times and given me hope to never give up. My passions are getting better/improving in the things I enjoy, I want to also get better at the things I’m not good at. My main passion this year are getting to meet BTS because in Korea these is a law that men 25 or older have to serve their military for a couple of years so they might be disbanding next year.

2 comments:

  1. Yeoboseyo Annabelle.
    I liked the way you have introduced yourself well.
    Your information about BTS reminded me about when I took my daughter to the Korean festival in Wellington.
    Remember to start new ideas in a new paragraph.

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    1. Hi Mr.Ward.
      Thank you for the feedback, I'll use paragraphs next time.
      I'm sure your daughter would of had a great time at the Korean Festival as well as me.


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